Well, in the name of putting myself out there, I’m posting a poem (I hear there is a cold front in Hell). God speed readers of eD. God speed.
in the time zones
the time knows
when you sleep
i lay awake
i’m not alone
but i feel so
end your day
so I find mine
feed your soul
i draw blinds
fill your mind
squeeze my eyes
hunger’s race
stars steal time
in the time zones
the time knows
when i sleep
I dream of you
so when I wake
my eyes know
in the time zones
our seconds show
Categories: Creative Writing, Life, Observation, Poem
Reblogged this on eternal Domnation and commented:
Strange how something I wrote almost two years ago just popped into my head. I found myself driving to work thinking (and repeating) in the time zones the time slows…I looked up this piece of work (I use that term intentionally as a fork in the road) and it definitely brought a smile to my face. Back to this time zone I go…
I had just thought of you, planned to visit, when I got your like. =)
The blogging universe works in mysterious ways! Hope you have a great weekend!!
keep doing that 🙂
Well I can’t say no to that! Thank you 🙂
just thought i’d visit a bit to thank you for likng my poetry today, especially our brave Linda. it was not easily written and probably a difficult read all the way thorugh, i appreciate that a lot. and then i found your poem….and this!
end your day
so I find mine
feed your soul
i draw blinds
fill your mind
squeeze my eyes
hunger’s race
stars steal time
delicious wordplay and imagery…ty for that.
Absolutely wonderful! More poetry please!
Keep writing! I loved it!